tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-364661476588393868.post530023869990272634..comments2023-10-12T01:57:21.311-07:00Comments on Litterbug: Alan Bakerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04600883215748277587noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-364661476588393868.post-74826253653226713692010-05-26T09:59:05.804-07:002010-05-26T09:59:05.804-07:00Everything's a work-in-progress, waiting to be...Everything's a work-in-progress, waiting to be remixed by JBR...Alan Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04600883215748277587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-364661476588393868.post-11342329171683662692010-05-24T09:34:26.351-07:002010-05-24T09:34:26.351-07:00If you're anything like me, Alan (and I suspec...If you're anything like me, Alan (and I suspect you are, in quite a few ways), you probably don't really get the idea of a definitive final draft anyway :-)Aidan Semmenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06557740419796502719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-364661476588393868.post-48831066339847033452010-05-24T05:01:54.589-07:002010-05-24T05:01:54.589-07:00Not harsh at all Aidan. Anyway, I'm pretty thi...Not harsh at all Aidan. Anyway, I'm pretty thick-skinned :-)<br /><br />You're probably right, but I would point out that numerous drafts preceded this version.Alan Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04600883215748277587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-364661476588393868.post-68043456526687876032010-05-24T03:02:50.059-07:002010-05-24T03:02:50.059-07:00Very good, Alan, some nice imagery illuminating th...Very good, Alan, some nice imagery illuminating the observations and the history lesson. Gut feeling suggests it could be tightened up slightly to great advantage: or maybe it's just a bit discursive for me. I'd probably regard it as an excellent early draft. Hope that doesn't sound too harsh! :-)Aidan Semmenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06557740419796502719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-364661476588393868.post-55182165541999455652010-05-19T08:20:32.224-07:002010-05-19T08:20:32.224-07:00Thanks Matt, glad you enjoyed it.Thanks Matt, glad you enjoyed it.Alan Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04600883215748277587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-364661476588393868.post-9535314153033935942010-05-18T05:30:59.431-07:002010-05-18T05:30:59.431-07:00Enjoyed the poem(s) a lot, Alan. Must get over to ...Enjoyed the poem(s) a lot, Alan. Must get over to Derby to see the paintings too.Matt Merritthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12371656447328595720noreply@blogger.com